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Tuesday, May 12, 2020

My Letter




Dear Jacinda Arden, I am writing this letter to you to say you are doing a wonderful job as PM. Here is my problem I would like to address, the school pool is to cold, and I think I speak for most people in saying we should get heater for the pool. We can do this by raising money and talking to Sheldon park people at the council.

 I hope you respond, Hayley Towns 

 This is a made up letter I know this wont happen.
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2 comments:

  1. LeanneMay 12, 2020 at 10:28 AM

    Hi Hayley,

    A heated pool in Belfast is a great idea, so tell me what would your suggestions be for fundraising?

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  2. Miss RogersMay 12, 2020 at 11:22 AM

    Kia ora Hayley,

    What a great idea writing a letter to Jacinda Ardern.
    In your letter you said 'here are some problems', however you only told her one, what are the other issues you'd like to address? Perhaps you could give Jacinda some ideas on what she could do to fund a heated pool.

    :)

    P.S. our pool is 18 degrees which is nice and warm!

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